Kia Ora, In lock down, we had to do our work from home, our teachers made google meets/zoom meetings for us to meet on. We did literacy and maths, on Fridays we don't do maths but we still do literacy. Our literacy is fun though. Our teacher Miss Smith explains everything we have to do, sometimes we get to play a game. The first thing we have to do is a free write (it is on a certain picture). At the moment we are focusing on personification, (personification is where you compare something to a human, e.g The flowers danced in the wind). Do you ever do a free write at school?
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 27, 2021
5 comments:
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1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
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Fantastic work Grace. This is a great example of how to complete personification.
ReplyDeleteHi Grace it me Kayla again. I really like your story. You are so good with your work good job keep it up.
ReplyDeleteHi Kayla, Thanks for your feedback
ReplyDeleteHi Grace it's me Maisey. I think your story was great. Keep up the good work. Bye!!!!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Grace
ReplyDeleteI love youre story, I also like how you described him well Great work Bye!!!!