Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, July 30, 2021
Grace's Tasty Tokyo Olympic Slides
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HI MY NAME IS RYLEE FROM KOKATAHI KOWHITIRANGI SCHOOL I LIKED YOUR PRESENTATION YOU COULD OF ADDED AN INTRODUCTION.
ReplyDeleteHi Rylee, thank you for you feedback!
ReplyDeleteHi Grace, My favourite slide was the geography one about Japan. I learnt a few things by reading your answers. Next time you could add a photo of the mascot design you did in your literacy book, I'd love to see it. Keep up the great work.
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