Hi I'm Grace, For Literacy we had to write about Nellie the Elephant, before we wrote the story we had to answer the questions and to the tasks, one of the tasks was to write a story on the questions we answered
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Friday, April 16, 2021
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Hey Grace, I love that your title is very catchy and that you have had a go at paragraphing your writing. Next time remember to use fullstops through out your blog post. Keep up the great posts!
ReplyDeleteHi Grace, we liked how your writing about Nellie had a happy ending. It was sad to read Nellie was in a circus fire. Next time you could add colour or draw picture of Nellie. From Brontes Reading Group. Parkview School
ReplyDeleteHi Vic/mum, and the Brontes reading group, thank you for the feedback. Next time I will add a picture and have more colour.
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